IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

Air transport is increasingly use to exported fruits and vegetables to countries where they can not be grown or out of seasons . What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#air #transport #fruits #vegetables #countries #seasons
It is said that exporting
fruits
 and
vegetables
 to other states where they are difficult to farm or are not available due to weather changes has increased recently.
This
 has several advantages in terms of the economy of the exporting
country
 and to imported
country
, people can enjoy
fruits
 and
vegetables
 throughout the year. One of the prime advantages is the economical benefits that bring to the
country
 which sends
fruits
 and
vegetables
 to other
countries
.
This
 brings foreign currency to the state,
thus
 leading to the development of the
country
.
For instance
, it is reported that China earned about 10% of the total income in 2020 by exporting
apples
. Another main plus point is, that people, can enjoy a variety of
fruits
 and
vegetables
, throughout the year without depending on the weather or even not growing those foods in their region,
as a result
 of
air
 transportation. To exemplify, Sri Lankans can eat
apples
 throughout the year,
although
apples
 are not grown in Sri Lanka.
However
, there are some detriments
such
 as environmental problems, has increased due to
air
 transportation of these foods. To be more specific,
air
 pollution by emitting greenhouse gases by planes has increased and
this
 has a major impact on Ozon layer depletion. Another drawback is the economical crisis in the food importing
countries
 due to foreign currency wastage on unnecessary import of these foods.
For instance
, in Sri Lanka, the popularity of
apples
 went up and apple trading leads to foreign currency wastage as well as is a reason for the economic crisis today. In conclusion, there is a trend of
air
 transporting
fruits
 and
vegetables
 to other
countries
. On the one hand,
this
 is an economical strength for exporting
country
 and people can enjoy that food any time in other
countries
. On the flip side,
this
 can cause some environmental problems and economic problems for importing
countries
.
Submitted by sandamalipc1 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: