You stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. Write a letter and explain: - How you enjoyed staying with your friend. - Explain the object which you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - Mention how you plan to return the object. Model Answer

Dear Joe, I am writing to say thank you for your invitation. During the stay
last
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week, my son Tom was having so much fun with your son, and Martha and I were
finally
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taking a break. We played
monopoly
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and had a nice time chatting with you and your wife. I definitely want it again soon. Let's find a place where the kids can drain their energy on their own
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we can take turns to look after them. Meanwhile, the others can chat and take a rest. When we returned
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home,
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I found a few of the
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cards were in the big plastic bag in which we brought our toys. I guess it must be the kids making a mistake when they were told to clean up their own mess. I think we can find a time to meet again
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I will bring back the cards to you. By the way, Tom is always mentioning he wants to play with Timmy again
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. Let's
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make
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happen soon. I am looking forward to hearing what your plans are. Best wishes, Martin

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organization
Break the letter into clear parts: start with thanks and how you had a good time, then describe the mix-up, then tell how you will return the object, and finish with a kind ending.
grammar
Make short and clear sentences. Try not to mix many ideas in one line.
content
Add a short sorry for the mix-up and a clear plan to bring back the item.
tone
Polite and kind tone all through.
content
The letter shows all asked parts.
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The plan to return the item is clear.
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