The central government, the city government and individuals should all be responsible for protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that the central and municipal

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as well as individuals

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should all shoulder the responsibility of preserving the environment. From my perspective, I strongly agree with

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with, the central

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should enact laws to promote environmental protection

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the country level.

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, cars and

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which emit

large

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amount

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of

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should be banned nationwide.

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, the carbon dioxide and

sulfar

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sulfur

dioxide released from the

veihchles

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vehicles

will reduce tremendously. It is

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the

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responsibility

reponsibility

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responsibility

of the central

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to fund the

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construction

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construction

of clean power stations, including hydroelectric and geothermal power plants.

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, the city

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can work closely with the central department on setting up regulations favouring environmental protection.

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, the city administrator should encourage companies to sell eco-friendly products to the public. Tax refunds can be applied as a reward to corporations aiding in protecting the environment.

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, individuals should

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responsibility to save the environment. In other

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, people can cut carbon consumption by travelling frequently

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public transport. They can take the underground or ride bikes to work

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of driving private cars.

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, residents can stop using disposable products, like plates, plastic bags and chopsticks. Rather than using disposable bags, they can take reusable cloth bags when shopping in the supermarket. As mankind has entered a throw-away society, a majority of people throw

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furnitures

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and housing appliances away every day.

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of doing so, residents can donate old

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furnitures

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to

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charity stores, so that the needy can buy them at a relatively low price and recycle the housewares. In conclusion, environmental protection is of vital importance so

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joint efforts from the central

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, city

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and the public are required in

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cause.