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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Whether the loss of particular
species
 of
plants
 and
animals
 is the main environmental problem has been discussed.
This
 essay will discuss both these views and my opinion will be presented below. The proponents claim that the diversity of
species
 should be considered
first
 when measuring environmental
problems
. They argue that basically all
species
 are essential to the ecosystem ,especially for some typical
animals
 and
plants
.
For instance
, some harmful insects can destroy almost all of the
trees
 and bushes at a particular time
,
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 and can do a lot of harm to forests because once the bushes and
trees
 are destroyed, much
soils
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 would be flooded with water, and it put
threat
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 to
animals
' habitats. With the help of some kinds of birds, they can treat those harmful incests as their food and restrict them from breeding. Under these situations,
trees
 and
plants
 in the forests will be saved and the erosion of water and soil will be limited. The opponents argue that there are more important environmental
problems
 that we should focus Probably, they put more concentration on the direct
pollution
 made by human beings.
For example
, the emission of harmful gases caused by factories and cars does harm to the environment in many aspects, from air
pollution
 in urban areas to water
pollution
 in rivers and seas.
This
pollutionpollution
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pollution pollution
pollution-pollution
 can significantly cause the death of
animals
 and
plants
.
Nevertheless
, in order to produce more products and resources, people cut down
trees
 and destroy forests, which will lead to excessive deforestation and soil erosion, and
also
 put threats to
animals
 and
plants
. Compared to the loss of
species
, these conducts can cause environmental
problems
 even worse. In my opinion, I tend to believe that there are more important environmental
problems
 beyond
species
, as these phenomena are the results of
pollution
 from human beings, and the ideal practice is to stop polluting human societies.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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