Some people say that vertical city is best where people can live, while others say that horizontal cities are better. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
World
population has increased Correct article usage
The world
for
Change preposition
in
last
100 years. When increasing population, Correct article usage
the last
type
of Correct article usage
the type
cities
become important. It is considered by some that vertical cities
are better. Others think that horizontal cities
are more
logical choice. I totally agree that vertical Add an article
the more
a more
cities
are the best.
First
of all, living areas are limited
Add an article
the limited
whole
world. If people construct buildings Correct article usage
the whole
Change preposition
in as
as
horizontal style, soon after areas can not Change preposition
in
be find
for new buildings. Change the verb form
be found
Correct your spelling
That's
That
That is
Thats
whyCorrect your spelling
That's
,
natural places are used to construct. Remove the comma
apply
This
damages environment
. As it is known, we have almost problem Correct article usage
the environment
about
pollution. Horizontal Change preposition
with
cities
increase it. According to study
, applied Correct article usage
a study
in
Carolina Nature Research Center in 2015, if Change preposition
by
temperatures
of seasons continue to Correct article usage
the temperatures
Correct your spelling
increase
increse
Correct your spelling
increase
0.5
Celcius degree, in 2040 drouth and starvation will be observed in almost all countries. Cutting Change preposition
by 0.5
forest
triggers climate change. Thence, we should protect nature. In vertical Fix the agreement mistake
forests
cities
, green
design could be used for sustainability.
The other main problem is public Add an article
the green
a green
transport
for horizontal architectures. In this
case, distance
between malls and buildings Add an article
the distance
are
far. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Also
, it is Correct your spelling
difficult
diffucult
to public Correct your spelling
difficult
transport
because of Correct your spelling
separated
separate
Correct article usage
the seperated
seperated
houses. Correct your spelling
separated
Accordingly
, individual transport
becomes popular. And so, it causes environmental pollution. However
, in vertical cities
, transport
is suuplied
easily as public. Correct your spelling
supplied
Furthermore
, less
markets, shopping malls and hospitals are required in Change the quantifier
fewer
vertical
one.
In conclusion, as I have mentioned above, vertical Add an article
the vertical
cities
have more advantages than horizontal
Add an article
a horizontal
the horizontal
one
. Especially, in terms of environment, building types are really critical. BecauseCorrect pronoun usage
ones
,
it affects Remove the comma
apply
design
of all Add an article
the design
cities
' architecture. To protect our world, we should make designs to construst
vertical Correct your spelling
construct
cities
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