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The Only Reason For Learning A Foreign Language Is Work Or Travel . To what extent do you agree or disagree.?

#reason #language #work #travel
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 argued by some people is for working or travelling.
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 with the statement because I believe there are
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 a study degree and friendship, so I will explain below. In
this
 modern life, many people have
intention
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 to study abroad for
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 future. They have some preparation when though
this
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 despite good academic achievement,
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, every university
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 the student the admission with some
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 score. The score
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 between universities
for example
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English
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the English
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 university requires
the
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minimum score
at
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 550 in TOEFL for postgraduate studies.
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, many
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 spend a lot of
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such
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 the requirement. Young people in
this
 digital living have an amazing connection to the world
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 their social media. They love to learn the
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languages
language
 because it will make a good relationship with their friends.
Although
 they can
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access
accsess
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 in some communications. It is
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to
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 voice or video calls.
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, it will have
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positive
 impact
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exchange
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diversity
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another reason for learning a
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foreign
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 is both study and friendship. I suspect there are other numerous
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from
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 work or travel.
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 it was many reasons, everyone
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 the urgency of learning the
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 in
this
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