Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to comperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give yout personal opinion too.

İ

t

Use synonyms

is considered by some people that a

sense

Use synonyms

of

competition

Use synonyms

in

children

Use synonyms

should be encouraged. Others believe that

Use synonyms

children’s

Change noun form

children

show examples

who are taught to

Correct your spelling

cooperate

compete

comparative

comperate

Correct your spelling

compete

rather than compete become more useful adults. İn my opinion , a

sense

Use synonyms

of

competition

Use synonyms

in

children

Use synonyms

should be encouraged , and

thus

Linking Words

children

Use synonyms

can be more confident in their schools.

Firstly

Linking Words

, whole

children

Use synonyms

are sent to school by their parents , and

therefore

Linking Words

children

Use synonyms

have the right education .

On the other hand

Linking Words

, provided education reveals

competition

Use synonyms

amon

Correct your spelling

among

children

Use synonyms

and

moreover

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

competition

Use synonyms

is becoming different senses

such

Linking Words

as

be

Wrong verb form

being

show examples

more confident and

be

Wrong verb form

being

show examples

less shy . Unfortunately , there are many

student

Change to a plural noun

students

show examples

who

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

shy in

schools

Fix the agreement mistake

school

show examples

. İn addition , these

children

Use synonyms

can'

t

Use synonyms

talk with their teachers or their classmates . Many

children

Use synonyms

can be rescued from

this

Linking Words

feature if

Use synonyms

sense

Add an article

the sense

a sense

show examples

of

Correct your spelling

competition

competiton

Correct your spelling

competition

should be encouraged among

children

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, a shy child will be more confident if he will become

Add an article

a

show examples

competitor in his school.

Secondly

Linking Words

, another point to consider is that some people think

competition

Use synonyms

is not necessary among

children

Use synonyms

.

Correct your spelling

According

Accordin

Correct your spelling

According

to these people ,

competition

Use synonyms

causes

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

bad effects

for

Change preposition

on

show examples

children

Use synonyms

. İn my opinion , a child will live many troubles in his future job if he doesn'

t

Use synonyms

have

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

sense

Use synonyms

of

competition

Use synonyms

.

Therefore

Linking Words

many parents should

be

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

Correct your spelling

encourage

encouraged

encoruage

Correct your spelling

encourage

their

children

Use synonyms

for

Change preposition

to

show examples

Use synonyms

sense

Add an article

a sense

the sense

show examples

of

competition

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, a shy child who doesn'

t

Use synonyms

has

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

sense

Use synonyms

of

competition

Use synonyms

never be

Add an article

a success

show examples

success

Replace the word

successful

show examples

in her job. İn conclusion , the

sense

Use synonyms

of

competition

Use synonyms

should be encouraged for

children

Use synonyms

by parents and

teacher

Fix the agreement mistake

teachers

show examples

.

Thus

Linking Words

many

children

Use synonyms

will become more confident thanks to

competititons

Correct your spelling

competitions

competition

. İn my opinion ,

children

Use synonyms

won'

t

Use synonyms

live trouble in their future job

career

Fix the agreement mistake

careers

show examples

if they will become

Add an article

a competitor

show examples

competitor

Fix the agreement mistake

competitors

show examples

.

Consequently

Linking Words

, the

sense

Use synonyms

of

competition

Use synonyms

should be encouraged

for

Correct word choice

so

show examples

Change noun form

children

show examples

children

Use synonyms

's will have a better future .