You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time. Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to request a return date extension for the books I borrowed from the college library

last

week. My ID card no is 234589. I will explain the whole situation that happened

last

night and I hope you will understand. Yesterday, my uncle went to work. After a couple of hours suddenly, we got a call from his office that he got a heart attack. Afterwards, they took my uncle directly to the hospital. The time when we reached the hospital my uncle was in the emergency ward where he had major heart surgery. Due to his operation, I have to stay with him because my parents are too old to take care of someone.

As a result

, I can not able to come back home on time and I am unable to return the books on the due timeline.I really apologize for

this

and definitely, I want to fix my fault by doing volunteer work in the library. I hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology. I would like to hear back from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Kulwinder Kaur

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

193 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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