Analysts tell us that many people today fell stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?
There is no doubt that stress is a great concern all over the world as many
people
have difficulty in
controlling their lives. In the following essay, I aim to identify the sources of Change preposition
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this
problem as well as some viable solutions to it.
From my perspective, one of the most significant obstacles to feel
stressed is Change the verb form
feeling
shortage
of money. And it is not only one cause, Add an article
a shortage
the shortage
however
all depend on money. Add a comma
,however
People
don’t
pay attention, don’t
devote time Correct word choice
and don’t
for
themselves. Most Change preposition
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of
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people
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the people
don’t
give themselves to have a rest and do something new or do something which they enjoyed like a hobby. Many of us assume at the first
time they work to earnings, that’s why they don’t
work favorite
activities and they Change the spelling
favourite
don’t
feel themselves
pleased. When Remove the pronoun
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people
sense satisfied
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satisfaction
then
they are
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care
take
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taken
caring
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care
to
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face
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the face
to
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skin
, to Add an article
the skin
behavior
.
There are several solutions that could be taken to solve the issues. Change the spelling
behaviour
First
, people
should try to get a job, which they relish from it and it should not be a profession, but a hobby and this
brings a lot of money. According to analyst physical activities such
as yoga affects the brain so it reduces stress effectively
helps us improve sleep and concentration. Correct word choice
and effectively
Second
, a successful person take
care of his appearance, Change the verb form
takes
this
applies not only to clothes but also
to the face, hair and figure. These habits will improve health and reduce stress in life.
In conclusion, nowadays being stressed is very high, so people
have to improve their health and reduce depression.Submitted by akzhans03 on
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