Analysts tell us that many people today fell stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?

There is no doubt that stress is a great concern all over the world as many

people

have difficulty

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controlling their lives. In the following essay, I aim to identify the sources of

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problem as well as some viable solutions to it. From my perspective, one of the most significant obstacles to

feel

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stressed is

shortage

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a shortage

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of money. And it is not only one cause,

however

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all depend on money.

People

don’t

pay attention,

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devote time

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themselves. Most

of

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people

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the people

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don’t

give themselves to have a rest and do something new or do something which they enjoyed like a hobby. Many of us assume at the

first

time they work to earnings, that’s why they

don’t

work

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activities and they

don’t

feel

themselves

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pleased. When

people

sense

satisfied

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then

they

are

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care

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take

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caring

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to

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face

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,

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skin

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, to

behavior

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. There are several solutions that could be taken to solve the issues.

First

,

people

should try to get a job, which they relish from it and it should not be a profession, but a hobby and

this

brings a lot of money. According to analyst physical activities

such

as yoga affects the brain so it reduces stress

effectively

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helps us improve sleep and concentration.

Second

, a successful person

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care of his appearance,

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applies not only to clothes but

also

to the face, hair and figure. These habits will improve health and reduce stress in life. In conclusion, nowadays being stressed is very high, so

people

have to improve their health and reduce depression.