Today many people frequently change their jobs. What problems does it create? How to solve them?

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In contemporary times, more and more people change their position of
employments
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frequently
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of unfavourable working
conditions
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.
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,
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development has led to
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the destruction
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of work processes. Fortunately, it can be alleviated by
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the creation
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of favourable working
conditions
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by employers.
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with,
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persistent
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resigning from work has brought about
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in task completion.
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is due to the fact that
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bosses have to constantly pause the job processes to find skilled persons to replace employees that resigned. More often
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that
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not, with the employment of new staff
member
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members
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, projects are often started all over as the
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old and new workers have different modes of working.
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,
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the Piggyvest
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Piggyvest
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founder stated in an interview that, their application creation process took three years as their Fullstack Engineeer left
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halfway
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half way
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of building, thereby resulting
to
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employing a new developer that started the task all over.
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, leaving jobs regularly tend to have a negative effect on
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individuals
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indivduals
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individuals
. As
,
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recruiters are less
willingly
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to employ a person whose curriculum vitae shows they leave employment easily
inrespective
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irrespective
of reason.
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, to drastically reduce the
amount
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of time
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personnel
personnels
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personnel
leave a job, there is a need for management to provide
a
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great working
conditions
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for members of their staff.
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could include favourable salaries, flexible working hours, and a peaceful office environment. It is no news that nurses in Nigeria are constantly leaving hospitals they work in
search
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the search
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for
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better pay. In the same vein, employers and
employer
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employers
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should
also
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sign contracts that favour both parties.
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This agreements
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should limit employees from being able to resign without plausible cause. In conclusion, in recent times, more often than not individuals tend to change
job
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jobs
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easily.
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persistent action
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has
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led to negative consequences for jobseekers as recruiters
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reluctant in hiring them. Thankfully, I believe creating good employment
conditions
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can exponentially reduce the recurring resignation of members of the
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labour force
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