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WHAT ARE THE PROS AND CROS FOR CHILDREN OF WATCHING TELEEVISION?

#cros #children #teleevision
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Nowadays, with the development of technology, scion
tend
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 to watch
television
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 in their free
time
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. They prefer watching
television
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 to playing some outdoor activities. So what are the benefits and drawbacks of being friends with
television
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? In
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 essay, I will discuss some pros of watching
TV
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 and some harmful effects if
children
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 spend too much
time
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 on
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 activity. Let’s start by looking at the advantages of using
television
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 to entertain. One of the main positives of watching
TV
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 is that
children
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 can obtain plenty of knowledge and skill even learning and giving information from around the world. Today, so many
programs
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 are a source of information about news, culture, science and nature, …
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, if one person wants to learn about some countries’ culture but cannot afford to come there, he or she can give information and experience by watching some travel
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.
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, watching
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 is
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 an activity that family members can do together, bringing an opportunity to narrow the generation gap. Any family members can talk, share and comment about the movies or the
programs
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 that they are watching therefrom family will become more and more harmonious. Turning to the other side of the argument, spending so much
time
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 on
TV
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 can lead to some eye diseases.
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, on the weekend,
children
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 may spend all day watching
TV
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 because of the attraction of interesting
programs
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 and movies.
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 activity makes eyes overworked, which is the reason why
children
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 may
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 as eyestrain and short-sightedness, …Another major drawback is that can be isolated
children
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 from other friends or people. What I mean by
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 is that
children
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 only use their
time
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 for watching
television
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 but do not use
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 for playing some outdoor activities with their friends. They may become more and more have distance from other people and even meet trouble with some social communication. All things considered, watching
television
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 can bring two sides to the problem. The parent should let
children
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 watch
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 for a specific period of
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, and avoid watching too much. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of broadening knowledge eventually outweigh any negatives.
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