You recently attended a series of English lessons in a language school. However, you were unhappy with the teaching quality. Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter: explain why you chose to study English at the school describe the problems you had with the lessons suggest how the classes could be improved

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with English
classes
being thought at school. I was referred to
this
school by my family friend stating that it's the best.
However
, I did not feel the same after attending
classes
for over a month. To provide a background, I am a non-native speaker of the English language. I explained
this
at the time of joining and I was promised that it will be considered while taking
classes
,
however
, The
classes
are being thought at the expert level which is very tough for me to get up to speed.
In addition
to that, I was not explained well in case of any doubts asked.
Also
, the explanation was not in a detailed fashion. It would be so helpful if they could provide me with some assistance in answering my queries and move me to a class where most students are non-native speakers.
This
would help me in achieving more scores and understanding the language in depth. Looking forward to a response from you. yours faithfully, Vivek V
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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