You are getting married. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend to invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter: * describe who you are going to marry, * tell the schedule * explain why it’s important him/her be at the wedding.

Dear Jack, I hope

this

finds you well. I am extremely excited to tell you that I am getting married soon, and

this

is a formal invitation to you to participate in the wedding. I am going to get a hitch with Sushmitha, a girl that I met at my cousin's birthday party. It was love at

first

sight, we spoke with other for a few months, and

then

we decided with each other we are meant to be a couple forever. So, here it is. The wedding ceremony will take place at the Cinnamon Garden hotel in Colombo, on the 25th of September. Proceedings will start at 10.30 am with the Poruwa ceremony. After that, there will be some rituals that take place till 3pm. Being my best friend for years and years to come,

moreover

being the lifesaver when was in Australia, I want you to be there at my wedding.

In addition

, it will be an honour to me and to my bride. Until we meet at the ceremony, let me stop here. Best wishes, Supun

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