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You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter: · Explain what will be happening · Offer your apologies in advance · Invite him to join the celebration

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Dear Sir, Hope
this
 letter finds you well.
This
 is Peter who is a student from Class A. I am
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writing
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writing
this
 letter to
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inform
infrom
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inform
 you that I would like to hold a graduation party. Our class will graduate
the
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 end of
this
 month, so I want to hold the graduation party
next
 Sunday, September 15th. It will take place
on
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 my garden, and I want to invite all the
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 from my class, so it is about 25 people. I am planning to start from 5pm to 10pm. We will have
barbecue
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 in the garden
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 and have
live
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 band to play music. We will have some other activities as well,
such
 as
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game
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. I want
apologies
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 to you in advance because we may
continues
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 late into the night, and we may have some noise that
affcet
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affect
 to the neighbours. The live band will only come for the
first
 2 hours, and we will try
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better to control our voice. If you are free on September15th, please feel free to join
our
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. I am appreciated
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 you can come and celebrate with us.
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Please
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Plaese
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 let me know if you need other information
of
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 the party. Looking forward to your
responce
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response
. Regards, Peter Chan
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