You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter: · Explain what will be happening · Offer your apologies in advance · Invite him to join the celebration

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Dear Sir, Hope

this

letter finds you well.

This

is Peter who is a student from Class A. I am

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writing

writting

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writing

this

letter to

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inform

infrom

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inform

you that I would like to hold a graduation party. Our class will graduate

the

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end of

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month, so I want to hold the graduation party

Sunday, September 15th. It will take place

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my garden, and I want to invite all the

student

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from my class, so it is about 25 people. I am planning to start from 5pm to 10pm. We will have

barbecue

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in the garden

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and have

live

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band to play music. We will have some other activities as well,

such

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game

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. I want

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to you in advance because we may

continues

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late into the night, and we may have some noise that

affcet

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affect

to the neighbours. The live band will only come for the

first

2 hours, and we will try

our

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better to control our voice. If you are free on September15th, please feel free to join

our

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. I am appreciated

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you can come and celebrate with us.

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Please

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Plaese

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let me know if you need other information

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the party. Looking forward to your

responce

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response

. Regards, Peter Chan

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

205 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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significant milestone
personal achievement
celebration
attendees
venue
advance apologies
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noise level
parking arrangements
warm invitation
festivities
get to know
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