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Some people say there is no need for print newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #print #newspapers
In the modern era, the
internet
 is the greatest invention of advanced science. In
this
 context, some individuals believe that there is no more need for print
newspapers
. I strongly agree with
this
 idea and will provide my reasons and give examples based on my experience.
To begin
 with,
invention
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 of the
internet
play
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 a vital role in
the
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society. Because of the creation of the
internet
, the world now becomes a global village, we can communicate with each other
any
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at any
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 time.
For example
, there are multiple sources of
latest
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the latest
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 news
such
 as Facebook, Twitter and YouTube.
Furthermore
, every news channel has
their
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its
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 own
websites
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website
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 that
also
 contains a lot of
latest
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the latest
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 news.
As a result
, people can access information
in
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at
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 any time without reading
newspapers
. Nowadays,
people
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trend
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tend
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towards
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toward
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 print
newspapers
are
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is
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 declined.
Secondly
, there are a lot of trees
cutting
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 for the purpose of making
newspapers
 that
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affect
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effect
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affect
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 the environment.
Newspapers
 are made with the help of
papers
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paper
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. So, the main source of
papers
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paper
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 is trees.
For instance
, there are many problems
such
 as climate change, global warming and floods due to
cutting
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the cutting
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 of trees.
As a result
, the world is facing
different
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a different
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kind
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kinds
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 of diseases
such
 as lung and eye infections because of climate change. In conclusion, the
internet
 changes the mindset of people
towards
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toward
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 printing media.
This
 essay discussed
my
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 reasons
of
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for
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 my opinion and as well as,
I
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and I
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give examples and reasons
my
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for my
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 idea.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital revolution
  • sustainability
  • instantaneous
  • editorial integrity
  • demographic disparities
  • gatekeeping in journalism
  • nostalgic value
  • economic viability
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