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Compassion and a holistic approach to medicine remain quintessential for patient care. During my internal medicine residency, I learned from my
patients
. Every patient serves as a case of learning. I presented case discussions to my
team
 which taught me to communicate information efficiently. While rotating in
cardiology
 these lessons and the satisfaction of managing highly complex cases with a dedicated
team
 consolidated my
interest
 in
cardiology
. In my 
cardiology
 fellowship at The Indus Hospital Health Networks, I have worked in managing
patients
 with acute ischemia, including ST elevation MI,
patients
 with
heart
 failure, valvular
heart
 disease, and arrhythmia. Especially in the era of covid, I have been engaged in treating
patients
 with COVID and cardiac complications. 
This
experience
 helped me to understand evidence-based 
cardiology
 and clinical decision-making better. My clinical skills and confidence have improved dramatically as I have gained
experience
 caring for widely diverse patient populations in various clinical settings. I learned about my
interest
 in intervention
cardiology
, it has been my prime
interest
 since the start of my
cardiology
 residency
,
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 and
further
 intensified while working under the
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mentor ship
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 of my supervisor
Dr.
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 Sajid A. Hameed
Dhakam
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Dhaka
, who is known as one of the best interventionists in town. My dedication to academic excellence and compassionate,
patient-centered
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 care in my efforts to care for my
patients
 have always been appreciated by my seniors. I have gained the knowledge and clinical
experience
 essential for working with culturally diverse populations with varying types and severity of cardiac problems, as well as effectively functioning on a multi-disciplinary
team
 of professionals.
Additionally
, with my experiences working
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cardiac
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 surgery department at
National
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 Institute of Cardiovascular Diseases and the electrophysiology department at Tabba
Heart
 Institute, I have enhanced my desire to gain
further
experience
 in percutaneous interventions for coronary artery and valvular
heart
 diseases as well. I plan to shift
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 Canada permanently with my nuclear family for the sake of a better future for myself and my son. As my husband is a great I.T. consultant and excels in his field, he
also
 has great opportunities everywhere. Canadian
experience
 will be helpful in many ways to achieve
excellency
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 in my field of
interest
 and
University
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the University
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 of Ottawa
Heart
 Institute has an excellent teaching faculty to groom me. As a
person
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 I am able to forge excellent working relationships with other staff and peers, and am committed to working creatively and collaboratively with my abilities
of being
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 a problem solver. I believe that with my educational and professional experiences, as well as my motivation, enthusiasm, empathy and compassion for others, I would be a valuable and productive member of the 
team
 as a fellow.
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