In recent years, there is an
that the elderly should
work
if they are capable
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. From my perspective, I disagree with
this
point of view.
On the one hand, for some countries, a myriad of areas are suffering from human resource
. To deal with
this
problem,
this
group of senior citizens can be an additional
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force to take the vacant job positions.
For instance
, in Singapore, the majority of senior
people
choose to continue to
work
as
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in the airport or in public facilities which helps the government solve
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force crisis.
Furthermore
, having an occupation can be a motivation for them to become more positive,
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the communities. After retirement, most aged
people
would put up with negativity due to the feeling of constraint.
Therefore
, working can stave off
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boredom and help them
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mental
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which
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root from the limitations of the conversation in their relationships.
On the other hand
, allowing
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old
people
to
work
would worsen the competition in the
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market. In some countries that have
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workforce, young
people
could be stripped
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work
opportunities, not because of their incapabilities but
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is no post available since the old workers do not resign.
Consequently
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populationsFix the agreement mistake
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which causes
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unemployment
rateFix the agreement mistake
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and anxiety among them.
In addition
, it is hard to assure their working quality.
Work
efficiency depends on hardworking, consistency and
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on details;
however
, senior workers have a tendency to commit more errors at
work
due
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health conditions.
Moreover
, they have to suffer from
a higher health conditionsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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leading to restrict
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working ability; as well as taking more day-off for
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.
In conclusion, the elderly shouldn’t get
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to continue to
work
due to the
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accident and avoiding the
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market from being under pressure.