IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6

Giving detailed description of crimes in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some people therefore suggest that the gov ernment should impose restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
With the rise in the number of newspapers and television channels, almost all crimes are covered with detailed
information
Use synonyms
. There are divided opinions on the consequences of
this
Linking Words
 description. Both views are discussed in
this
Linking Words
 essay. It is true that most
people
Use synonyms
 of the world access and rely heavily on electronic and print
media
Use synonyms
.
Hence
Linking Words
, it is the responsibility of the
media
Use synonyms
 to serve the community with sensible and socially acceptable news because their reader class consists of vulnerable
people
Use synonyms
 like children, teenagers and even misguided beings.
Such
Linking Words
 readers may get negative inspiration from
crime
Use synonyms
 descriptions and harm either themselves or other innocent
people
Use synonyms
. It is very important to control
crime
Use synonyms
 rates in the world and the detailed descriptions of the modus operandi of criminals may result in a contradictory situation.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, some
people
Use synonyms
 assert that providing detailed descriptions of crimes helps in creating awareness in the
people
Use synonyms
. They
also
Linking Words
 add that
this
Linking Words
 awareness is the key factor in preventing more
crime
Use synonyms
 and
also
Linking Words
 helps
people
Use synonyms
 in protecting themselves from criminals.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the
information
Use synonyms
 about the
crime
Use synonyms
 may
also
Linking Words
 be helpful in catching those criminals and bringing them to justice.
Finally
Linking Words
, with the increase in
crime
Use synonyms
 in all parts of the world, it is essential for the
media
Use synonyms
 to give elaborated
information
Use synonyms
 to their viewers but I think they should differentiate and filter useless and provoking
information
Use synonyms
 from their coverage. By doing so, the
media
Use synonyms
 can play an important and fundamental role in keeping a check on the
crime
Use synonyms
 in society and al in building responsible individuals.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: