With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

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and online websites are
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where
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can gain helpful knowledge , but due to the fact that numerous information on the
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is not always suitable for young people, so I totally agree that connecting to the
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should be regulated by their parents. Admittedly, the development of technology today brought us a good opportunity to access online sites from all over the world which is a good way to learn and improve their skills, especially for younger generations, they can approach educational information which is helpful for their studies.
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, my younger sister learned Chinese only by watching Youtube videos and being able to speak Chinese fluently which gave her a great chance to work in China.
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, encouraging young generations to connect to educational and academic websites is beneficial and useful for their studies.
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, high accessibility to the
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could affect
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's behaviours. They are unable to make differences between good and bad information, so a lot of time they tend to follow everything they saw online which might affect their behaviours and the worse situation could be that they might be exposed to a number of dangerous situations.
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, a group of child psychologists noticed that the more
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access the
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without adults' observation the more they act aggressively and have less patience.
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, the Thailand government reported that the rise in crimes in 2021 has something to do with the rise in
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accessibility among the youth. So, it is crucial that
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surf the
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under parental supervision and restrictions. In conclusion,
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and social media are full of knowledge,
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should be limited to access to some sites that are not appropriate for them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous situations
  • limit access to the internet
  • inappropriate content
  • online predators
  • physical and mental health
  • monitoring and guiding
  • online safety
  • school curriculum
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