With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?
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can gain helpful knowledge , but due to the fact that numerous information on the Use synonyms
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should be regulated by their parents.
Admittedly, the development of technology today brought us a good opportunity to access online sites from all over the world which is a good way to learn and improve their skills, especially for younger generations, they can approach educational information which is helpful for their studies. Use synonyms
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, my younger sister learned Chinese only by watching Youtube videos and being able to speak Chinese fluently which gave her a great chance to work in China. Linking Words
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, encouraging young generations to connect to educational and academic websites is beneficial and useful for their studies.
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On the other hand
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's behaviours. They are unable to make differences between good and bad information, so a lot of time they tend to follow everything they saw online which might affect their behaviours and the worse situation could be that they might be exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Use synonyms
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, a group of child psychologists noticed that the more Linking Words
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, the Thailand government reported that the rise in crimes in 2021 has something to do with the rise in Linking Words
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should be limited to access to some sites that are not appropriate for them.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite