Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is not fair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

At present time, famous sports professionals are wealthier than other parts of society. Some

people

believe that it's definitely fair while others have

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opposite belief. Personally, I agree with the

second

view,

however

, it doesn't mean

athletes

should earn similar money that other

people

receive.

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will compare two opinions and my view will be mentioned.

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group say that

athletes

have a really better financial situation far more than they expected.

Although

they achieve a special place in countries which helps them to become famous and popular among

people

, other professions like teaching, nursing and lowers have more useful, stressful and paramount careers to nations and their education and health. They believe that

this

part of society is more eligible to have

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economic situation. Whereas, they have

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same

earning

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as other jobs and there isn't any preference for them in getting better

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or services. Another part of

population

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believe

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that

athletes

would be able to bring wealth into their community.

Besides

, they can help their nation to attract

consideration

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of other countries.

This

makes so many opportunities for the governments to create more wealth and better economic

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conditions

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for

nation

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the nation

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.

In other words

, sportsmen/women are really profitable than we think. They say that if nations want to become developed, they should support their

athletes

as well. To conclude, I believe that

athletes

have a considerable effect on developing countries and it's not surprising that they are

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the

center

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of

people

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consideration

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.

However

, if authorities want to reduce the differences between members of society, they should pay more attention to other jobs.