Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of media personalities get fame because of the money and

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, rather than their hard work which creates a negative impact on teenagers.

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impressions on the youth make them less hardworking, and it

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involves them in the addiction to substance abuse which affects their health in their later life. The fame received by celebrities is often achieved by marrying a wealthy spouse or by showing off the

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in the industry which impacts youngsters adversely, as they believe that these are the only important practices, needed to achieve.

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has led to the decreased value of hard work, dedication, and consistency essential to score better in life.

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, recent research in Japan has shown that the quality of assignments given in high schools has lowered by 40% in the

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decade.

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, the youth easily gets inspired by the practice of showing off money and

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has indulged them into more clubbing and parties, as a

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result they have high drinking practices at a very early age, to be clear, adolescents consider it as a part of the

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and copying it will make them famous as well. The addiction to smoking, drinking and sexual activities would affect their health in the long term as well.

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, reports have shown that 40% of people suffering from chronic respiration and liver diseases are the ones who started smoking at their teen ages. In conclusion, the effects of

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and wealth are creating a vast impact on youth as they are unable to understand the importance of hard work and dedication, and are

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, indulging themselves in the wrong practices which are costing them their health.