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Social media marketing can influence what consumers buy. Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree?

#media #influence #consumers
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In today’s age, the influence of social
media
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 marketing on people’s purchasing is very interesting.
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, the public is attracted by social publishing advertisements and buying some specific
products
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 online or offline.
This
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 topic says, c influence to buy something by attracting social
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 advertising and I will discuss in detail agreeing with
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 with, social
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 marketing is playing the most important role to sell goods worldwide and is undergoing tremendous changes to fight new marketing challenges. Generally, all of us are using regularly social
media
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 applications like Facebook, Twitter, WhatsApp, and google with android and IOS versions. People see many advertisements for selling equipment when they browse social
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 applications and most of the daily necessary goods displayed attract us here. So people buy goods sometimes from seeing
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 advertisement.
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Last
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 week I saw a brand advertisement at the time of using the Facebook application which is badly needed for my
home
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 but I wasn’t getting
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 product by searching nearest store. At
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, I found it through social
media
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 marketing which influences me to buy. In my opinion, it always influences us to buy something online or offline store and easier to buy something even at
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. Customers can get
products
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 by sitting at
home
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 through
home
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 delivery and can get
products
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 without paying instantly through the cash-on-delivery option. So social
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 marketing influences all of us to purchase something. In conclusion, a large number of customers buy their
products
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 to see advertisements on social
media
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. 81% of consumers' purchasing decisions are influenced by their friends' social
media
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 posts.
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