In the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driverless.the only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers . Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweighs the disadvantages ?

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recent times , we are living in a fast developing world . Due to that development we

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we can assume that in the future all cars,buses,

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will be

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.

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: only passengers can travel inside those transportation

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.Personally speaking, I believe that in spite of the benefits , the drawbacks of

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transportation

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are much more. In

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essay ,I will discuss and outline why I believe that the cons are more effective and

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the pros. My

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and most important point is that

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many people’s attention

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to focus on how

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vehicles going to make their life easier , deep down the same people will never trust technology in

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of “safe rides”.

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, from people’s past experience with

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they attend to understand that technology sometimes

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some errors .

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of that understanding and the fear of not

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a safe journey, they will never

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comfortable

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cars . My

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point is that

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could be dangerous for children.

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a child could get into a

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car and decide to go out without telling their parents.So in that case the child could be in danger and no one knows . To sum up , even though there are many benefits of

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transportation

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, the drawbacks are much more important to be highlighted.I personally think that these

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should not be available for personal use

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of not putting people’s lives in danger.