Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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that is
the most important thing about being wealthy. In my opinion, I absolutely agree that Linking Words
people
who have more should share with those who have less which would lead to better social relationships.
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others
is a great gift to individuals as the result of gaining happiness in return. Seeing someone succeed Use synonyms
as a result
of your help is a great present and always brings happiness to that person. More than that, Linking Words
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in other words
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more which leads to a positive and happy environment Use synonyms
as a result
. For these reasons, being able to help Linking Words
others
with one's wealth is a great opportunity and an important role in building up a happy and positive society.
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In addition
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people
is the symbol of kindness which is essential in today's society due to the fact that kindness is the fundamental thing that leads to a healthy society. Helping Use synonyms
others
is not a big deal, especially when individuals have the ability to do so, but it is a great deal for Use synonyms
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who get help as they can improve their lives afterwards. Use synonyms
Therefore
, more and more Linking Words
people
should help Use synonyms
others
more according to their abilities.
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others
which would make Use synonyms
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world a better and peaceful place.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite