Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people
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belive
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that only governments and large companies can help in
improve
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the
environment
on
massive
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scale and individuals can
brought
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up the
less
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improvements. I completely agree with
this
opinion and think that
government
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and large companies can make a huge difference in the
environment
.
First
of all, the
government
has changed the engine norms of four-wheelers recently, they have changed the engines from BSIV to BSVI because
in
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BSVI Engines produce
a
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less amount of carbon footprints as
compare
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to BSIV engines.
In addition
, the
government
is planning to reduce the petrol and diesel engine car due to the pollution increasing in the cities. And introduced the Electric Vehicle Cars in
the
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society as it helps in decreasing the amount of global warming.
For instance
,
government
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the government
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of India gives a tender to one of the biggest
company
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companies
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namely TATA for the manufacturing of Electric
car
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in the country.
Secondly
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the big companies can
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Campaigns for educating
the
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society to
protecting
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the
environment
drives
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and drives
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the
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beach cleanings
in
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all over the country. To illustrate, the company namely Plastic collector drives
the
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different cleanings
in
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every month by collecting the plastic or waste materials from there and
then
they recycled them and
produced
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a
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effective useable product.
Moreover
, the individual can contribute by putting a small effort
of
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not using plastic materials and
help
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in the growth of nature through planting in their house or their nearby places. To conclude I opine, that people can help in minor quantity to save the
Environment
however
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,
government
and the big firms can put up changes in a large amount for the nature.
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  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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