You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about – what course you are doing now – why you are not satisfied with that course – what course would you like to change to.

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Dear Mr Wilson, I am witting

this

letter with the request to change my current course from your university due to some reasons.

First

of all, I am pursuing

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bachelor's degree in finance. My class started on the 23rd of May.

This

is my

third

week of class. I would like to change the course because I am not quite interested in the subjects.

Moreover

, I feel it is very difficult to manage those and it is really tough than I imagined. I would like to commute my studies in marketing as I am interested to do practical based activities.

In addition

, I realise

this

stream has more job opportunities than others. I am waiting for a positive response and please do needful help to me. Yours faithfully,

Rose John

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

129 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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