An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Dear Kabil, I received your letter and am delighted to know that you are visiting my place for the summer holidays. I am sure you will be having a great time here and I can join you during the weekends as I'm off from my work. Regarding your stay, I would be able to share my room with you during your period of stay.
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, if you would to like explore the countryside of my town, I have a few connections who will be able to arrange a cottage for you which is in the vicinity of Rangan hills. Let me brief you on the places and activities that you should try during your visit. There is a hiking community which organizes a two-day hike on the kolli hills every weekend. I will forward the details and would recommend you to enrol for the same. There are a few scenic places which we can visit together. I would suggest you bring cotton clothes as the summer has begun, it's getting hotter now. you can take your sun creams as we are planning for the hike and don't forget to get your hiking shoes. An additional set of blankets would be good. I look forward to hearing from you and can't wait to see you. Warm regards John
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