An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Kabil, I received your letter and am delighted to know that you are visiting my place for the summer holidays. I am sure you will be having a great time here and I can join you during the weekends as I'm off from my work. Regarding your stay, I would be able to share my room with you during your period of stay.

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, if you would to like explore the countryside of my town, I have a few connections who will be able to arrange a cottage for you which is in the vicinity of Rangan hills. Let me brief you on the places and activities that you should try during your visit. There is a hiking community which organizes a two-day hike on the kolli hills every weekend. I will forward the details and would recommend you to enrol for the same. There are a few scenic places which we can visit together. I would suggest you bring cotton clothes as the summer has begun, it's getting hotter now. you can take your sun creams as we are planning for the hike and don't forget to get your hiking shoes. An additional set of blankets would be good. I look forward to hearing from you and can't wait to see you. Warm regards John

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

217 words

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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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