In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
These days, any cultures around the world have specific aspects which are relevant to their culture. In some of them young people usually believe that if they try hard, they could reach to any things.
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could have advantages and disadvantages, and Linking Words
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essay will be mentioned some of them.
On the one hand, believing to achieve aims helps society be more active, and has people with enough passion to effort. Linking Words
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think that trying hard can achieve their aims, they will do more work and effort. Use synonyms
For example
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want to have an expensive car, so they go to work Use synonyms
instead
of doing nothing, Linking Words
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society will be active by working in any section even Linking Words
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Secondly
, Linking Words
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kind of belief, makes them be passion and do work without reluctance. Linking Words
In other words
, their mindset regard to goals helps them to have a sense of satisfaction, so they do their best in any field which Linking Words
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lead to increase passion (which results in happiness) in the community.
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On the other hand
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could lead to expanding crimes and violence. Use synonyms
That is
young adults who think that with hard-working and can reach different stuff probably do many activities for reaching their goals. Linking Words
For example
, if some of them want to be reached, they will do their best, and they do not care about other things. Linking Words
As a result
, it is possible that they have to do some crimes on their way to hitting their aims, Linking Words
such
as killing someone or hurting someone. Unfortunately, their aims are the most important feature for them and don’t care about how to achieve those. Linking Words
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makes the community unsafe.
To conclude, Linking Words
although
mentioned attitude about Linking Words
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could have some disadvantages, I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, and by making some rules which are relevant to Use synonyms
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's crimes, mentioned attitude could be helpful for any country.Use synonyms
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