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Some people think that private companies should not be allowed to carry out any technology. Only the government can do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, technological developments are rapidly increasing . Some people have an opinion that private
firms
 must be restricted in
research
 about technology and that only governments should be allowed to carry out
research
 . To a great ,extent I disagree with
this
 statement and the reasons for my opinion will be stated
further
 in
this
 essay . The lion reason is most of the developments that are helpful to the citizens are from private organisations . Private
firms
 have a proper
management
 structure and they will be more efficient than the
government
 . The
government
 have a lot of jobs to do for the citizens and they will not be able to focus on the technological
research
 field ,
thus
 most of the developments will get delayed .
Furthermore
 , as the private
firms
 work on the basis of investors , they will have to satisfy the investors about the progress .
Thus
 they will work their maximum for the sustainability of the company . When it comes to the
government
 , technological
research
 will be publicly funded , employers will not be concerned about the funding and pressure from
management
 and there are fewer chances for them to work productively .
Moreover
 , the recruitment to
government
-related jobs is based on exams like PSC , civil service examination and the like . The
government
 will not be able to find talented and passionate employers through similar exams for specific jobs like scientists, graphic designers and the like .
On the other hand
 , private
firms
 will have a recruitment system for identifying their desired employe for technological
research
 . To conclude , private
firms
 are efficient due to various factors like pressure from investors and
management
 and private
firms
 are productive and have
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proper
management
 to recruit appropriate employees.
Therefore
 , private
firms
 will be more efficient in the field of technological
research
 .
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