Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say *Agree to this arrangement. *Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.

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Dear Kumudu, I hope you are getting well. I have a nice idea for
next
weekend. I am writing
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letter to request you, I like to meet Anne and Gavi weekend at my home. You know I
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will get leave for that days. So, I have more time to spend with your kids. In ,addition I like to request in the morning they drop in front of our home and evening
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can arrange transport for both of them.
Firstly
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morning
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have planned to get out of breakfast and
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we will go small picnic at Dolukanda mountain. On the other ,
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we can take lunch at a dolukanda restaurant. There for I have arranged a special little musical event for them. and you can pick them up at least 5 p.m . The
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arranged small games and some functions for relaxing our minds. My view of point, it might be help full to relax their mind. And
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evening I will prepare a special cake for them. So, I like it and
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hope you accept my request. Thank you for spending your time and we will see you later. your sincerely
gayathri
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