Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say Agree to this arrangement. Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.

#friend #children #house #weekend #*agree #arrangement #*say #time #*describe

Dear Kumudu, I hope you are getting well. I have a nice idea for

weekend. I am writing

this

letter to request you, I like to meet Anne and Gavi weekend at my home. You know I

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love them. As well as

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will get leave for that days. So, I have more time to spend with your kids. In ,addition I like to request in the morning they drop in front of our home and evening

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can arrange transport for both of them.

Firstly

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morning

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have planned to get out of breakfast and

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we will go small picnic at Dolukanda mountain. On the other ,

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we can take lunch at a dolukanda restaurant. There for I have arranged a special little musical event for them. and you can pick them up at least 5 p.m . The

day

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arranged small games and some functions for relaxing our minds. My view of point, it might be help full to relax their mind. And

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evening I will prepare a special cake for them. So, I like it and

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hope you accept my request. Thank you for spending your time and we will see you later. your sincerely

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

209 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say *Agree to this arrangement. *Say what time is suitable for you. *Describe what you are planning to do.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

some believe studying alone is better and while some others believe group study is far good. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries today,parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co educational schools. Some people think that children going to to single sex schools have disadvantages latter in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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