Some people think that healthcare should be free for everyone; other things that people should pay for their medical cost themselves discuss both views and give your opinion.

Healthcare
is a basic necessity for every citizen, according to some folks
healthcare
facilities' costs should be worn by the government ,
however
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some believe that people should bear
this
cost by themselves. I firmly believe that government should make
healthcare
free if not for every citizen
then
at least for those who cannot afford it. In
further
,paragraphs both opinions will be discussed along with my view. To commence with the
first
view where some people believe that medical care should be free , the
first
and foremost reason is that ,many cannot afford costly treatment and they have to spend their whole earnings which makes them depressed ,
consequently
they tend to choose the wrong direction like theft or borrowing a huge loan to save their loved ones .
Moreover
, health insurance is
also
costly so most of them prefer not to take one and suffer the hefty medical bills.
Additionally
, To save the medical bills, they delay their treatment or tend to try home remedies which make treatment more difficult at later stages or most of the time impact an individual's health severely. So aforementioned reasons are enough to convince the government to make
healthcare
free for everyone .
On the other hand
, people who held another viewpoint say that there are so many sectors , which need investment
such
as education or transportation .
Additionally
, the state should focus on infrastructure development like building more hospitals or investing in new medical universities to get more doctors ,rather than making
healthcare
free for everyone.
for instance
, if the infrastructure is good and the country has plenty of doctors
then
the medical cost will automatically decrease.
Moreover
, if the medical facility is free
then
everyone will seek immediate attention
instead
of working on their immunity. To conclude, I would like to say that making
healthcare
completely free is not a prominent solution , and it will impact citizens' mindset to get medication for each and every small disease immediately.
Instead
of that , the ministry can provide free insurance who cannot afford it and should invest money in other important sectors like education, and infrastructure.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal healthcare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • public health
  • innovation
  • government expenditure
  • personal responsibility
  • preventive care
  • taxation
  • medical infrastructure
  • health equity
  • healthcare system
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