The unlimited use of cars may cause problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Technical advancements have made
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life of humans to commute easily. There
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number of companies who make the cars which are being used by people that have created several difficulties. Absolutely, people should be encouraged to avoid
cars
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usage. The issues and ways to cut the number of vehicles will be discussed in
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. To commence with,
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,in present time
indivduals
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individuals
have their private transport which leads to traffic on the roads.
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, it increases the
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time
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effect
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their jobs and
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them mental trauma. To illustrate, in Toronto, every morning arrival time for highway users are plus 30 to 40 minutes. It has been noticed by
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of Scotia bank that employees in branches of cities are always late and
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frustrated
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frustrated
that decrease their work efficiency.
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, various detrimental gases come
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the
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environment
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environment
that pollute it and produce health issues too.
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layer gets
affect
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by harmful gas
carbonmono
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carbon mono
oxide
and
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help
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uv
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rays to reach
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earth
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that
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results
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skin cancer. Moving towards solutions,
government
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the government
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can help to aware citizens
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problem with
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public
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of commuting. The frequency of subways, trams and buses must be reachable to commuters.
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, the fares
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be affordable for every level of
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.
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, awareness can be provided at local places like metro stations and bus stations. In conclusion, the uncounted cars have made trouble by increasing traffic and pollution which
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by efforts of government and society. It
is not even decrease
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the issues for
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generation but
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environment
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for the future.
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