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Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?

No one can deny that obesity and malnutrition are becoming more and more threats in some developed countries. The accelerating pace of life force
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 to be fed with junk
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 or processed
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. According to some
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, reform of the fast
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 taxation system may be a solution to deal with
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 problems. As far as I am concerned, a
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 on them cannot abstain
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 from eating fast
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 so I disagree with the statement.
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 with, it is highly important to understand that in today’s conditions, eating processed or fast
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 is compulsory for the majority of
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 who have to attend
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 or go to their job in the morning.
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 workers and students, mostly have to wake up earlier and skip healthy breakfast. Eating fast
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,
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 as sandwiches and toast, on the road is the only solution for them. For
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 reason, increasing
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 rates on these
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 may restrict
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 to reach them.
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, in Turkey, a
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 policy was put into action by the government regarding products,
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 as alcohol and cigar, to reduce the percentage of consumption they push
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 to consume other illegal products rather than reducing them.
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 of an extra
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 on unhealthy
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, some other workable solutions can apply
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 as public announcements about the benefits of having a healthy diet or encouraging
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 so that they have a more mobile lifestyle. The former can be achieved readily by using public television channels or cooperating with well-known doctors.
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, public awareness of eating healthy and avoiding fast
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 can be aroused.
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, notifications popping up on the screen in the workplace at regular intervals may hearten workers to be more mobile. To sum up, changing peoples’ eating habits by educating and pushing them to be more mobile in order to burn calories which get fast
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 are effective solutions rather than adding an extra charge on
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. If sufficient awareness can be aroused, the rate of being overweight will reduce gradually.

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