The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate some changes in the way people accessed a city hospital in two selected years 2007 and 2010.
The growth of parking spaces, transit amenities, and intersection upgrades are the key differences in
the
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road
access to these facilities.
The most notable alteration between 2007 and 2010 is the emergence of two new roundabouts. The first one was built at the hospital road
’s three-way intersection with the hospital’s encircling ring road
, while
the second one was located at the four-way intersection of the hospital road
and the city road
.
The six bus stations along the hospital road
were removed to make room for a new bus station on the western side of the road
, as can be seen by examining the other characteristics. WithSubmitted by ngocanhpham18ulis on
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