Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extend do you agree?

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In
society
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,
scientists
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and
experts
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seem to be more important than
musicians
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and
artisits
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artists
.
Modren
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Modern
society
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affects due to
musicians
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and artists rather than
scientists
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and
technology
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experts
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. On one hand, the more important value of modern
society
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is
scientists
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and
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technology
tehcnology
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technology
experts
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. They
work
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hard to bring change in
society
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and provide
us
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latest
technology
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for example
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computers, machines,
automachines
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auto machines
, etc. In recent years, when there
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no
technology
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people
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did not aware
what
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of what
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to do. They really did hard
work
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for themselves. But
now a days
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nowadays
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,
technology
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is growing fast. All
work
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done
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is done
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by machines. There is no need for
people
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to do all
kind
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kinds
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of
work
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. Most
work
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done
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by
technology
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like cashiers doing all their jobs on computers,
doctors
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and doctors
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prescription
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all
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done by computer. There is no need for paper and pen to write
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a prescription
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prescription
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by
doctor
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a doctor
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. I agree that they play an important part in
community
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the community
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.
On the other hand
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,
musicians
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and artists are only for
enjoyment
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the enjoyment
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of
society
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. They perform their songs for fun and enjoyment. They create some smiles and
excitment
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excitement
to
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for
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the
people
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of
community
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the community
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. In conclusion, The importance of
experts
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and
scientists
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are
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is
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more important than
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anyone
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any one
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anyone
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else.
However
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,
musicians
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and artists
also
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play role in
society
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. They give
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moments and fun time to
people
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.
As a
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result
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both play an important role
for
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in
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society
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but
experts
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are more important because they make life easy to make better products.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valued
  • modern society
  • scientists
  • technology experts
  • musicians
  • artists
  • reliance
  • scientific advancements
  • practical benefits
  • driving economic growth
  • daily lives
  • culture
  • human emotions
  • express ideas
  • provoke thought
  • spiritual well-being
  • emotional well-being
  • preserving cultural heritage
  • subjective nature
  • diversity
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