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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,
the
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technology is developing rapidly all over the world.
This
 modern technology can drive the world to
driverless
vehicles
.
Then
 there will be only passengers inside these
vehicles
. I think the
driverless
vehicles
 concept is more beneficial than detrimental. Mainly,
driverless
vehicles
 will save valuable time for mankind in several ways.
Firstly
, people who drive their own
vehicle
 can engage in their own work by using
vehicles
 without a driver.
For example
,
instead
 of driving the
vehicle
 to the office in hurry to check your official mail, people can do it when they travel to the office by their
driverless
vehicles
.
Moreover
, trucks can deliver goods to a required place by giving just a command.
Secondly
, it is not required to learn to drive as you have a
vehicle
 that can move without a driver. It will save you time for some other important tasks.
As a result
 of
driverless
vehicles
, a passenger has no need to care about the driver. These
things
 will be advantageous for mankind.
On the other hand
, there can be some system errors in these programs and they will course to accidents. And
also
 robbers can hack the programs of the
vehicles
 which are carrying money and other valuable
things
 owned by banks and other institutes.
For example
, after the departure of the
vehicle
 carrying money or other
things
, robbers can enter the system and change the programme of the
vehicle
 to direct the
vehicle
 to their desired place. In the same way, they can kidnap anyone and demand money or some other
things
. These
things
 affect badly to society. In conclusion, in the future people will travel by cars, buses and trucks without drivers. It will save time and there are some disadvantages too. But in my point of
view
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 the advantages of
driverless
vehicles
 are far beyond that the disadvantages.
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