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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,
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technology is developing rapidly all over the world.
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 modern technology can drive the world to
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vehicles
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 there will be only passengers inside these
vehicles
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. I think the
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vehicles
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 concept is more beneficial than detrimental. Mainly,
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vehicles
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 will save valuable time for mankind in several ways.
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, people who drive their own
vehicle
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 can engage in their own work by using
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 without a driver.
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 of driving the
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 to the office in hurry to check your official mail, people can do it when they travel to the office by their
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vehicles
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.
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, trucks can deliver goods to a required place by giving just a command.
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, it is not required to learn to drive as you have a
vehicle
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 that can move without a driver. It will save you time for some other important tasks.
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 of
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vehicles
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, a passenger has no need to care about the driver. These
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 will be advantageous for mankind.
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, there can be some system errors in these programs and they will course to accidents. And
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 robbers can hack the programs of the
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 which are carrying money and other valuable
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 owned by banks and other institutes.
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, after the departure of the
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 carrying money or other
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, robbers can enter the system and change the programme of the
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 to direct the
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 to their desired place. In the same way, they can kidnap anyone and demand money or some other
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. These
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 affect badly to society. In conclusion, in the future people will travel by cars, buses and trucks without drivers. It will save time and there are some disadvantages too. But in my point of
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 the advantages of
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vehicles
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 are far beyond that the disadvantages.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • driverless technology
  • road safety
  • human error
  • traffic flow
  • congestion
  • real-time data
  • cost benefits
  • fuel consumption
  • vehicle maintenance
  • mobility
  • cyber-attacks
  • technical failures
  • infrastructure adaptations
  • ethical considerations
  • moral responsibility
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