You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, My application to study at your college has been accepted and I would be very thankful if you would take some time to answer a few queries I have before I will move to Dapperton.
Firstly
, I would like to check which ways of accommodation are available for
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students at your Halls of Residence. I believe there are both self-catering and catered options, but I am not sure if the
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students. Could you confirm whether or not
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, I would prefer to have a private room. The main reason I have chosen
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is that I am gluten intolerant. I am concerned that if I choose the catered
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near to the Halls of Residence?
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, if either my accommodation or food preferences are not available, would it be possible to arrange another
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? Thank you for taking the time to read my message. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Maximillian Welhaus
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hall of Residence
  • accommodation requirements
  • proximity
  • en-suite facilities
  • special accommodations
  • dietary restrictions
  • meal plans
  • kitchen facilities
  • campus canteens
  • securing accommodations
  • alternative housing options
  • private rentals
  • off-campus housing
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