You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
My application to study at your college has been accepted and I would be very thankful if you would take some time to answer a few queries I have before I will move to Dapperton.
Firstly
, I would like to check which ways of accommodation are available for Add a hyphen
first-year
first year
students at your Halls of Residence. I believe there are both self-catering and catered options, but I am not sure if the Add a hyphen
first-year
first
are
available for Change the verb form
is
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first-year
first year
students. Could you confirm whether or not Add a hyphen
first-year
this
option
is open for me? In addition
, I would prefer to have a private room.
The main reason I have chosen this
option
is that I am gluten intolerant. I am concerned that if I choose the catered option
, I will not be able to avoid gluten food. Could you tell me if gluten-free food is served for catered students? Alternatively, if it is not and I am allowed to stay in self-catering accommodation, is there a good choice of supermarket
near to the Halls of Residence?
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a supermarket
the supermarket
Finally
, if either my accommodation or food preferences are not available, would it be possible to arrange another option
?
Thank you for taking the time to read my message. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Maximillian WelhausSubmitted by kmgaya1996 on
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- although
- even though
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