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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Result of the advancements of digitalization, people can read the newspaper on the internet. Some believe that online
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 in the near future.
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 because the costs of paper and printing are expensive. We all know that tree is the only natural resource for paper production and it takes a long time to grow up
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tree. So, It is undeniable that
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electronic
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 is better than
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printed
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 in many ways. Another reasons are that the cost of online
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 is low, so the publisher could gain more profits.
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, the company could send the product to the consumer at their fingertips which helped to reduce the cost of physical delivery.
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, the publishers could sell the spaces for
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 to their sponsors.
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, the
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 is difficult to be maintained and it is not long-lasting like online
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. There are many benefits of online
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 which will transit the way of reading in new generations. As the file of
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 is in the cloud, so you could download them whenever you want.
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 does not cause any damage. To illustrate, readers could highlight or mark the part which they want to focus on or back to read in
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 time. If you mistakenly write something down on the
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, it was able to be removed without any marks. To sum up, I believe that
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 will disrupt the way that we read a
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 and the demand for printed
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 is decreasing to zero in foresee future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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