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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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 about criminal activity, both fictional and real-life, have become increasingly popular over the
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 few decades. There are many possible reasons for
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, but the two primary ones that I can think of are the underlying desire of
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 to see good overcome evil
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 and a fascination with criminal lifestyles. Almost all
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 about
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, whether in print or on TV, are about good
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 as detectives and law-abiding civilians, triumphing over bad
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, namely criminals. We often see
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 in fictional detective
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 ordinary person uses their intellect and skill to identify evil criminal masterminds. A good example of
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 is Miss Marple, an elderly woman who always manages to track down and apprehend evil criminals. A
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 reason is that
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 have a fascination with the
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 of criminals. Perhaps
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’s need for escapism. One of the most popular
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 20 years was ‘Legend’, a dramatisation of the
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 of the Kray Twins, two violent London gang leaders of the 1960s. The film, which I watched on TV, portrayed their violent behaviour, along with their opulent and chaotic lifestyles, and I do feel that
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 compelling viewing, despite how it shows evil
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 succeeding. Personally, unless it is related to real-life
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, I have little interest in either
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, I can learn something about social history and psychology. Why,
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, do
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 turn to
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 of
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? Is it simply for money, or are they motivated by power as well? And what causes
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 to join gangs and follow
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 like the Krays? These are all interesting questions. In summary, a desire to see good triumph over evil, along with a fascination with evil, are two reasons I think underlie the popularity of
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, but my interest in them is mainly limited to dramatisations of real
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