Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some are of the view that impartiality among men and
women
has been accomplished whereas, others believe that its a work in progress. While
this
may be true
to
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many developed
countries
I strongly consider it is widely open in developing
countries
.
Women
in
the
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management have increased significantly in western
countries
.
To begin
with, it is believed that
women
possess strong emotional intelligence when it comes to taking complex decisions. As an example, it is reported in Sweden, there are more
women
CEOs than males due to the intellectual capacity they have.
Secondly
, the myth of
women
can't do a man's job has been proven wrong by many.
For instance
, the United States air force operates 40 per cent of
their
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fighter pilots by
women
.
On the contrary
, some Asian cultures yet enforce strict restrictions on
women
.
Firstly
, these cultures accept
women
only to bear children and to do household work. To illustrate, in some parts of Iran it is prohibited to hold a job higher than her husband by law.
Moreover
, challenging these laws can occur detrimental consequences
hence
, gender equity is far from resolved.
Finally
, the result of all these injustice cultural restrictions will lead to the loss of many great
women
who should have come to the limelight. In conclusion, even though there are a considerable amount of examples exist in the world that gender equity has been resolved, I strongly believe that it is only visible in modern western
countries
and a systematic approach to both cultural and education reforms is needed to overcome
this
dilemma in the developing
countries
.
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