You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

Dear Alice, I hope you are doing well.

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of all, Many Many congratulations on getting engaged. I come to know about

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from your recent Facebook post. I must tell you that I am so happy for you.

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because you always told me that you'll never get married. On the other side, I am feeling so good that you have taken the right decision because a wedding is a part of life. I would like to give you some suggestions about your wedding celebration, you should go with the destination wedding in the Jaipur palace,

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the perfect place for all the functions. You do not need to worry about any arrangements, you only need to hire an event planner who will take all the responsibilities. Let us make a plan to meet, if possible. We'll have your bachelor party. I'll call our other friends too. That would be your

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party before getting married. All the best, Looking forward to seeing you. Regards, Shikha

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Oct 4, 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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