A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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Dear Alice, I hope you are doing well.

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, thank you so much for organizing a wonderful dinner for me

last

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night. It was so delicious, and I must say Dosa was superb, I'll definitely call you one day for its recipe.

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, I felt so good at your home, I didn't realize that I am meeting your family members for the

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time. They all are so friendly especially, your grandmother she has a good sense of humour. In fact, everybody is great, I would love to meet them again. I hope they all liked my present for them. I was not sure what they will like, so I decided to give them some household things. Now, I would request all of you to come to my place on any of the weekends if possible. We'll have great fun and my parents will

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get a chance to meet you all. I know they all would be happy to meet each other. All the best, Looking forward to seeing you Regards, Shikha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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