You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter:  Ask for time off and explain why  Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work  Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence

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Dear Mr Mark, I am writing a letter to inform you that I am planning to go on holiday

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month. Actually, my family members are planning a small reunion at our native place after the long pandemic. We have been invited to join them. Since

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would be a great opportunity to meet all my cousins and relatives, I would be required

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holiday to go to my home town.

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, I would request you to grant 5 days leave starting from 1st Nov'22. Considering the weekend, I will not be available in the city from 30th Oct'22 till 7th Nov'22. I will resume my duty on 8th Nov'22 as per regular office time.

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it is a small break period, I will try my best to complete all pending work by doing overtime without a claim.

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, I will hand over my charge to my colleague Mr John, he is

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working with me on the same project.

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, in case of any requirements, I will be available on a phone call. I appreciate your permission and approval for my holiday. I am looking forward to the necessary update. Yours sincerely, Robin,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

194 words

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