Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Ram,
First
and foremost, I would like to congratulate you on your selection to the university. I would like to give you some suggestions about different types of accommodations that you might opt for. I used to live in a rented apartment, nearer to the university, on a sharing basis with my classmates. Though it was quite expensive, we had our independence and privacy.
Moreover
, it might be difficult for you to find a partner, or to rent any independent space.
Thus
, for the initial year, I would recommend to you meet the student union representative. They will guide you till you get the best suitable place.
Furthermore
, the administration department would be the best place for inquiry if you want to live in college hostels.
In addition
to
this
, I would like to warn you about the issues that you might face, some landlords demand security deposits and harsh rent deeds.
Therefore
, in order to safeguard your interests, the state administration makes strict rules and all landlords are supposed to follow that strictly.
Thus
, before signing any agreement and depositing money, one must read these regulations. I hope my suggestions might guide you and you will be able to take a decision on the basis of my suggestion.
Further
, if you need any other information, feel free to reach out. Yours lovingly, Shivam
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