Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Sania, I am delighted to know that you have been selected for a course at the same university as mine. As you have asked for my advice in choosing accommodation for yourself, I am writing

this

letter to let you know certain aspects before you begin your search. During my study days, I used to live in a flat at a distance of around 10kms from the institution. It was just opposite Green park in Friends society. Since that place is currently occupied, you have to look for other options in the city.

However

, I can suggest to you the best ways to look for an appropriate place to live. You should rely on the list of brokers provided by the University itself as they are proven to be the most reliable agents.

Additionally

, make sure that the property is in a good locality and has easy accessibility to supermarkets where you can find the items of daily need.

Further

, always be cautious and alert while signing any agreement with the landlord as it is very common that the students don't read the contract properly and have to face its consequence later. Hope my advice will help you find a good place. Feel free to reach out if you require any other information. Yours lovingly, Sneha

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