Your child’s school has arranged a trip abroad for students. The principal of the school asked some parents to join the trip to help. Write to the school principal and say: Why do you want to join the journey? How could you help during the trip? Ask some questions about the trip.

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Dear sir or madam, Hello, I am Kritika mother of Rohan who is studying in 5th-A grade in your school. I came to know from parent-teacher meetings that the school is going to organize an educational trip to Spain for six days and five nights. The teachers

also

asked if any parents would like to volunteer and accompany them. I am more than enough delighted to join the trip as I have been to Spain a couple of times from the office and I am sure my good knowledge of

this

place could surely provide great support. Due to my frequent visits to it , I am well acquainted with Madrid city and I

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read in an itinerary that there is a 2-3 days visit to Madrid city. I

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arrange entries to museums and galleries, but I would need additional information

such

as exact students to count along with teachers and parents travelling with us and days on which we visit these places so that I can make arrangements. I am thanking you for the opportunity and provide me with responses to the above queries so that I can make arrangements. Yours Faithfully, Kritika.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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