Your child’s school has arranged a trip abroad for students. The principal of the school asked some parents to join the trip to help. Write to the school principal and say: Why do you want to join the journey? How could you help during the trip? Ask some questions about the trip.

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Dear sir or madam, Hello, I am Kritika mother of Rohan who is studying in 5th-A grade in your school. I came to know from parent-teacher meetings that the school is going to organize an educational trip to Spain for six days and five nights. The teachers

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asked if any parents would like to volunteer and accompany them. I am more than enough delighted to join the trip as I have been to Spain a couple of times from the office and I am sure my good knowledge of

this

place could surely provide great support. Due to my frequent visits to it , I am well acquainted with Madrid city and I

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read in an itinerary that there is a 2-3 days visit to Madrid city. I

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arrange entries to museums and galleries, but I would need additional information

such

as exact students to count along with teachers and parents travelling with us and days on which we visit these places so that I can make arrangements. I am thanking you for the opportunity and provide me with responses to the above queries so that I can make arrangements. Yours Faithfully, Kritika.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attraction.To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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