You have just read an article in a national newspapaer which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. •Write a letter to the editor of the newspapaer. In your letter •Say which points in the article you agree with •Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres •Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of article. Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Vlad and I am writing to you to express my concerns about the article which was recently published in your newspaper. It says that all of the towns in our country have similar centres. The text you have published touches on a sensible topic about saving the historical parts of our settlements. Describing the lack of attention

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condition, which includes a broken roof and moulded walls, of the former mail post in the centre of our capital is great evidence that the problem really exists.

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, I would like to argue with you about the similarity of the centres in our towns. Our city, as a good illustration of my point of view, has a few significant differences from the other.

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, our central tower which remains from the old castle.

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a tower is common, but the one in our region was built from the white bricks, opposite to the most red-brick buildings.

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to that, we have a very long and wide central street, which is uncommon compared to narrow streets in other regions. Regarding my respect for your newspaper and the arguments provided to highlight my disagreement with city

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similarity, I would like to invite you to our town and suggest an excursion to the most attractive and valuable places. Yours faithfully, Vlad

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Expand on examples and details to fully convince the reader about the uniqueness of your town.

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The letter explains points of agreement before providing arguments against the article, showing a logical flow.

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The tone is respectful and formal, suitable for a letter to a newspaper editor.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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