Some people argued that distance learning is not as beneficial as traditional ways of education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
It is often argued that
distance
education is not effective as traditional methods for learning. This
essay will examine whether studying remotely or in-person learning is more beneficial and I strongly agree traditional ways are more useful.
First
off, distance
learning has different hurdles. People
's focus can be lost on anything since it is not a formal environment. People
can talk with their family, have breakfast or maybe play online video games at the same time as courses. For instance
, to according a report in Denmark last
year, students gained less knowledge and they did low scores from lessons in epidemic duration which was the peaked times for distance
learning. That's why having many distractors is not helpful for the educational system.
Another reason why learning in a class
is better is teacher's figure is more active. When all participants were in the classroom, a teacher could understand those who did not understand the topic easily or answer the questions in more detail. Thus
, traditional class
is an effective way to have strong communication between teacher and student. Furthermore
, people
can motivate each other and learn the topic deeply in a real class
, this
situation is not the same for the online class
since people
have to close their cameras for some reason. Taking libraries as an example, many people
go to libraries because they need to see other people
working with them simultaneously.
In conclusion, since there are many distractors and problems with studying remote, I strongly believe that a traditional learning system is more effective than distance
learning.Submitted by drsoguzhan on
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