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international sporting events such as the World Cup Footvall can bring people of different nationalities and cultures together far more than any other multinational gathering. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Global sporting events, and
in particular
, Football World Cup
are
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 undoubtedly having a major impact on the peace and harmony among
countries
. In many
countries
 participating
at
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 international sporting events has become a mainstream activity. It is in fact quite significant for two main reasons.
First
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 main reason is that
Sports
 provide an opportunity to showcase the talent of a nation and thereby gain respect and acceptance among other nations. It is possible to participate
at
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 different games hosted by various states and thereby
demonstrates
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 the capabilities of one's country. Certain nations might obtain consultancy from the winning country in improving their own teams and
this
 paves the way to promote bilateral relations among the
countries
.
Moreover
, the teams from
countries
 reflect the cultural values and clothing styles unique to
its
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 country and
this
 can attract the other
countries
 to engage in a discussion.
Therefore
, these activities undeniably
flourishes
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 the
harmong
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harmony
charming
 and friendly relations
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among
amoung
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among
 the States. Another significant reason is that
Sports
 help
developing
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 various
skills
 of people. It is recognized that
Sports
 help to produce a
well balanced
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 person;
Sports
 develop soft
skills
such
 as leadership
skills
, communication
skills
, analytical thinking and many other talents that contribute to a balanced life.
This
 in turn is an asset in dealing with people from different ethnical backgrounds and improving friendly relations among them. In short,
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experience
experince
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experience
 suggests that global sporting events are a great way to build meaningful relationships
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among
amoung
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among
 people from various
countries
 and they need to be promoted to sustain
long term
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 peace and harmony in the world.
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