It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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to draw a distinction between

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and wrong when they are very young. To help them find out

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difference, disciplinary measures are required. I disagree with the necessity of

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for

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because we should try to demonstrate the result of their

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and wrong choices and their effects on their lives by stimulating their cognitive capacity.

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, in some

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,

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might be required. In these situations, parents and teachers must avoid physical

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and inquire about other ways of

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as a necessity might have a negative effect on

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's behaviour.

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should be taught to make informed choices

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of being punished. When they make their own decision, they learn to take the responsibility for their

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or wrong choices and experience their impressions on their whole life, while

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the fear of doing

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activities might lead them not to be willing to gain more experiences in the life’s path and causes them to be isolated from the society or do things which are not suitable.

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, when

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are playing games on a smartphone in their beds after midnight, it is better to talk to them about the harmful effects of playing

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games

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the dark for their eyes’ health

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of

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,

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might be required and could fit in some

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. Since cognitive capacity for different age groups is different,

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might do something which is

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in their view, while it is wrong for that situation. In

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cases

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, the

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could be useful, but the way

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are being punished is very important. Parents and teachers should avoid imposing physical

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because it negatively affects both the mental and physical well-being of

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.

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, making some restrictions and depriving them of certain privileges for a short period could be more useful to help

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to distinguish between good and bad things.

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, parents could punish

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by creating some limitations to access their smartphones. To conclude, I would argue that it is not necessary to punish

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to differentiate between

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and wrong, but in some

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, a

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which does not negatively affect their health might be helpful.